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Sara
Knight of Swords
Chapter Four
A handsome,
fair-headed man of around a similar age to myself rode up alongside of
us. His features bore a classic aristocratic detail and his tall, upright
posture was consistent with a military career. I tightened my grip around
Juliet’s waist protectively. The snow was falling heavily now and she was
shivering violently. She looked pale and feverish as she rested her head
against my chest. I desperately needed to get her warm and put to bed
before she became seriously ill. I had no time for the antics of this man
or the others accompanying him.
I issued an
immediate challenge, a derogatory, affronted haughtiness in my tone to warn I
was in no fear of him. He did not answer. Instead he peered
imperiously at me, studying my face before his eyes moved to rest upon
Juliet. His expression softened to one of concern and pity, then flared
into desire. My grip upon Juliet tightened further, forcing a small
whimper of discomfort from her trembling lips. It did nothing to entreat
me to slacken my hold. Her safety, perhaps even her virtue may be at
stake. It was my duty to ensure both were kept intact. Juliet’s
beauty was enough to tempt any man.
I began again, ‘I
have no quarrel with you, sir. Let us pass without any incident. I
need to get my ward home and warm. She is ill. Let us be on our
way.’
This time the man
spoke. His voice was gentle, a persuasive tone to it I did not trust and
a firmness that made me wary. ‘I can help you. Give her to
me. I will make sure she is safe and warm.’
My eyes narrowed
instinctively. Nobody would take Juliet away from me and live to tell the
tale. I would have no more of his nonsense. ‘Who are you?’ I
demanded with authority.
‘My name is Gabriel
Masters. I am here to help you, Nathan. You must trust me.’
‘How do you know my
name?’
‘We do not have
time for questions. Give Juliet to me.’
Attack was the best
form of defence in situations such as this one. We may have been
surrounded by men, but they did not possess the powers that Juliet and I had
discovered natural to our beings. I aimed my eyes at the man and directed
a surge of energy towards him, assuming to knock him from his horse.
I did not, however,
expect him to give a loud laugh or for my attempt to prove duly anticipated and
blocked. The man slapped back the force of my mind game with a simple
glance of his eyes. It hit me hard. I almost fell from my saddle,
winded by the blow. Juliet gave a startled cry as she hung on to me.
One of the men near
Gabriel spoke out to him, anxiety in his voice, ‘Gabriel, we must be careful,
he is holding . . .’
Gabriel raised his
hand and the man fell silent immediately, although his expression still bore
evidence of his disapproval. Gabriel spoke to me once more, ‘Give Juliet
to me, Lord Valancourt. You are not yet fit enough to protect her.
She will be safer with me.’
I answered him
coldly, leaving him in no doubt of my resolve. ‘I will not give her to
you. She is not yours to take. I ask you again, sir. How do
you know our names? What do you want from us?’ My voice and temper
were rising in pitch. A dull pain began to throb behind my temples.
I had felt the pain intermittently since my vision with Juliet and the
murderer, and now it gained force. I wondered if I was not falling ill,
for this time it refused to leave me in peace. It spread around my body
to ache in my limbs and stomach.
Juliet held on to
me more tightly, clearly afraid of the stranger’s intentions. I looked
down at her to offer reassurance, and noticed her brow was furrowed. She
was also suffering, I could feel pain wrenching at her body in unison with my
own.
I was about to
protest further when I suddenly stopped, hearing the sound of hooves crossing
the forest floor. They were accompanied by the cries of hounds. It
had to be William and Edward finally catching up with us. I was at a loss
to know what to do.
Gabriel commanded
my attention with urgency. ‘If you have any care for Juliet, give her to
me. We are of the same race, Nathan, but your powers are not yet as
developed as my own. I will not harm her. I give you my word.
I can help you protect her from William Cameron, but you must trust me.’
My instinct to
shield Juliet from this man was fierce. I did not trust him despite the
sincerity I heard in his words. Only I could take care of her. Ever
since the vision, I had been possessive of that right. It was more than
just an instinct, it was a physical compulsion. I shook my head, angrily
telling him my answer was no.
Gabriel was equally
as irate, ‘I have no time for this, Nathan. We must protect Juliet from
William Cameron or he will sell her into slavery and we will lose yet another
female of our kind to the humans. I won’t allow another to be
taken.’ Gabriel gestured at one of his men. He moved towards me,
gripping my arms as Gabriel reached over to steal my precious burden.
I struggled, and
with Juliet’s help we at least made it difficult for them. But the man
who assisted Gabriel held my arms tightly, pulling them back with incredible
strength. She was lost to me. I struggled in vain to break free,
distressed by Juliet’s plight as she fought Gabriel with what little strength
she had left.
He tenderly cradled
her against his chest despite the frantic way she banged her fists against him
to free herself. Another of the men had removed his coat and was helping
Gabriel to place it around her freezing body. I watched exhaustion begin
to reign on Juliet’s paling features and felt defeated. Gabriel tucked
the coat around her neck as she slumped against him, resting her head against
his broad torso.
Just like a
petulant child, I lost my temper. I couldn’t help myself. ‘I won’t
rest until I have freed her,’ I fumed at him.
‘I have no doubt,
but you must trust me to help you at this moment.’
Gabriel looked down
at Juliet. Gently cupping the side of her face, he tilted it up towards
him. The moment he touched her, I noticed a radiance settle over his
features. His reaction sparked the flame of jealousy within me. I
had never had any need for the useless emotion of envy before, I had simply
taken any woman I desired. But now Gabriel kindled that flame until it
scorched my very insides.
I stole into his
mind, wanting to know his intentions regarding Juliet. To my surprise he
did nothing to stop me. I was allowed free access to the first layer of
his consciousness. He sought to keep Juliet safe, and for that I was
relieved. But he guarded the depths and secrets of his mind. Any
attempt I made to penetrate the lower levels was rewarded with a sharp burst of
painful energy. As a consequence of this heavy mental block, I learnt
very little about the man.
Gabriel began to
caress the backs of his fingers along the heavy bruise that stained Juliet’s
pale, pink cheek. I sensed him inside her mind looking for the memory of
the brutal attack. She made no attempt to resist. She was curious
about him and what he knew of us. She wished to learn more, just as I
did. I searched her memory with him, sharing his eagerness to understand
the cause of her injury.
She had been locked
away in the attic of Eldridge Hall for over a week, without food and the
comfort of a bed at William Cameron’s order. Not even one of the servants
had come to her aid. Whether through fear or respect, their loyalty was
firmly with their master.
William and Edward
visited her one evening with legal papers for her to sign renouncing her
inheritance of their father’s wealth. Juliet resolutely refused,
informing them it was her duty to carry out their father’s wishes. She
would not let him down. William lost his temper as he reasoned with
her. Juliet recoiled with fear when he threw the papers in her face, but
she stood firm. He accused her of bewitching their father. He
believed her to be a witch who could read and influence other people’s
thoughts. He would find a way to outwit her black magic, retrieve his
father’s estate, and end her life.
William had whipped
the back of his hand hard against the side of her face, causing her to spin and
fall. It was a miracle he hadn’t broken her cheek bone. More cruel,
vicious blows to her body ensued after he’d pulled her from the floor. But
she would not give in. Eventually she lay prostrate, weeping.
Edward had leaned
over her, his expression darkly gleeful. ‘I have another idea. How
about we arrange a marriage? William, you are already betrothed, but I
could marry Juliet. Everything would become rightfully mine as
well. I could share the estate between us. Then after a suitable
period of time I could get rid of her, sell her off in a bride sale. How
about it, brother?’
William had
frowned. His expression informed that he was not completely convinced
about the plan, but was willing to be persuaded. ‘It is an option.
Let us talk of it.’
Juliet had been in
too much pain to offer any complaint. Before Edward left, laughing with
pleasure at his own genius, he had given her two sharp kicks to her stomach
that had her screaming in agony.
The two brothers
had obviously come to some amicable arrangement because the illegal forced
wedding was to have taken place in a secret location the day after my arrival
at the house.
Gabriel searched
further into her mind as though he was looking for something specific. He
found it. A dark presence was dwelling in the lower level of her
subconscious. A pair of cold, grey, disembodied eyes stared back at us,
floating malevolently. They watched us with interest. I
recognised them immediately. So did Gabriel. They belonged to the
clergyman vampire. I heard the echo of his familiar cruel
laughter. A part of the monster’s soul was residing inside her,
tethering her consciousness to his own, holding her prisoner.
Gabriel and I
exchanged an anxious glance before he bent his head again to speak to
Juliet. I could feel his anger swell inside his mind as it did in my
own. But his voice was soft and gentle when he spoke, ‘Juliet, you must
let me command your mind. You are in so much pain and in urgent need of
sleep.’ She was quick to answer him, her tone agitated as she continued
to shake with cold against him.
‘I can’t
sleep. You saw him didn’t you? He’s inside me now, watching and
waiting. I can feel him. He makes me so cold. You know him as
Sebastian, and you have been searching for him for such a long time. You
know why he wants me . . . You know why he taunts me and waits for the
right time to take me.’
Juliet’s eyelids were
suddenly drooping as Gabriel continued to stroke the softness of her cheek, his
hazel eyes holding her gaze captive.
‘Shhh, little one,
all in good time. You must rest, we will talk later. Our journey is
long. I want you to sleep. I promise Sebastian will not trouble
you. I will protect you from him. But to do so you must allow me to
have command of your mind, just until we reach the safety of my home.’
I struggled in my
saddle, my arms still pinned. ‘No. I am not going to allow you to
control her.’
He ignored me, as
he caressed his fingertips through her damp hair.
‘You must trust me,
Juliet. If you don’t sleep you will die of exhaustion.’
She stared up at
him, her face expressionless. She did not answer him, but I could feel
her defiance, feel her mind fighting him as he pushed inside it. Gabriel
smiled down at her, so arrogantly sure of his eventual victory in their mental
battle. I lent her my own strength in support, but this only seemed to
amuse Gabriel.
‘You are very
strong, little one, and your protector valiant, but you are both not yet strong
enough to defeat me. It is useless to fight me.’
She finally
answered him in a hoarse, but none the less, indignant voice, ‘I allow no man
command of my mind, sir.’
‘Then I must force
you and it will cause you pain. I am sorry. Without my help you
will die. You leave me no choice.’
He was a strong,
firm, and unforgiving opponent. The energy he used to compel her was
indeed painful. Juliet gave a strangled, sobbing cry, and I found myself
torn from her mind. My efforts to re-establish our psychic bond were met
with desolate coldness, as though her presence did not exist anymore and she
was dead to me. The sense of loss and isolation were overwhelming.
I needed to be back inside her, knowing her thoughts, feeling her emotions
almost at one with my own, or I feared I may go mad.
Juliet was now
asleep in Gabriel’s arms. I watched him carefully direct her head against
his chest. He commanded the man holding my arms, ‘Bring him.’
The man tied my
hands behind my back, then took the reins of my horse, leading me off to follow
Gabriel’s hurried trot. Within minutes Gabriel had taken us on a route
through the forest that lost the sound of William and his hounds.
For the whole, long
journey, I kept my eyes trained on Gabriel and the sleeping Juliet. My
thoughts were conflicted between finding a way to retrieve our mental bond and
snatch her from him, and going along with his instructions in order to learn
more about our true identities and heritage. This stranger was another of
our kind. I owed it to both Juliet and myself to discover what I could,
even if it meant our discomfort. Juliet would not thank me for missing
such an opportunity. Besides, attempting an escape would surely prove futile.
We finally came to
a stop outside the entrance to a large Georgian house hidden in a broad,
expansive clearing within the forest. One of the men pulled me down from
my horse onto the gravel path. I shook him off, moving determinedly
towards Gabriel only to be brought up short by another of his small army.
The man blocked my path as Gabriel handed down the sleeping Juliet and
dismounted. Rage began to brim to fever point inside me. I had
spent the whole tiresome journey trying to re-establish my mental bond with
Juliet and thus break the spell of sleep Gabriel had cast over her. But
he had kept us apart. I could endure it no more.
‘Leave him.
Jason, untie his hands and bring him,’ Gabriel instructed as he retook
possession of Juliet. ‘Welcome to Arcadia, Lord Valancourt. My
home.’
I watched with
narrowed eyes as Gabriel began walking into the house. I followed the
moment Jason finished untying me, and snapped at him, ‘Wake her up, now!’
Gabriel ignored me
as he stepped into a grand hallway, heading for the stairs. I walked with
him across the wide rectangular stone floor flanked by ornately carved pillars
that reached up to the open third floor. They gave the impression we
travelled through a Greek temple. He swept Juliet up the stone staircase,
his man Jason and I both closely following.
‘I will wake Juliet
all in good time. Patience, Lord Valancourt.’
I hated the way
amusement echoed through his tone and the casual manner in which he flaunted
his control over both Juliet and myself. I continued our argument as we
ascended.
‘I said now.
No one should be able to force another human to do as he bids with the use of
mental trickery. I demand you let Juliet go this instant.’
‘I can see you are
used to getting your own way,’ Gabriel mocked me.
Enraged, I pulled
at his arm, making him halt his ascent. He leaned against the gold
balustrade and sighed with impatience. ‘You will have to be patient,
Nathan. Now, I must get your beautiful charge to bed so I can wake
her. She needs to feed.’
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