I Heard Her Scream, ‘He’s Coming For Us’
Hello,
After a week of working hard and being ill, I am finally getting back on form. Forget Me Nots will continue next week.
Jumping from writing a script back to a novel is a daunting prospect. They demand different ways of telling the story. What works in a book doesn't always work in a screenplay. So even though, technically the story was finished when I completed the script it will need to be tweaked and much more will need to be added to the novel. Anyway I will be fit and ready to get back to work next week and make Forget Me Nots the best novel you have read in ages! :)
In the meantime, check out the next part of my Knight of Swords, my New Adult, Gothic/Horror Victorian Vampire Romance below and an excerpt of the scary story on Thoughtcatalog.
Have a fabulous weekend!
Remember sleep well and don't have nightmares!
Sara
Knight of Swords
Chapter Three
I stared at the two
men coming up the stairs towards us, frantically wondering at our best
option. A backward glance at Edward confirmed there was no clear avenue
of escape. Edward closed in behind us and grabbed my shoulder. I
struggled to hold on to a collapsing Juliet. She gave a startled cry of
fear, shouting, ‘He’s coming. God help us, he is coming.’
A piercing shriek
echoed around the large hallway and staircase, diverting my attention
upwards. A cawing raven circled the room and flew straight at our group on
the stairs. As it did so, a large, heavy black mass engulfed the air.
We all froze.
We stood motionless, watching above our heads with a mixture of curiosity and
terror. Juliet tugged on my hand, but I remained transfixed. The
black cloud began to form and shape behind the raven. The bird completed
a circle of the room and suddenly dived towards us. The mass began to
separate. Out of its being spurted a hundred or more additional
ravens. I felt Juliet again tug hard on my hand – she shouted to me,
‘Don’t look at them, whatever you do don’t look at them.’
Her voice was
high-pitched, desperate for my safety. But I was hypnotised by the
strange sight, as seemed everyone else around me. The birds raced towards
us, diving at our faces. The two stable grooms each put a hand up to
protect their faces as the dark forms swooped low to peck and claw at their
eyes.
Chaos and screaming
ensued. I shoved Edward backwards and put up my arm to shield
myself. One of the birds clawed viciously at my hand, drawing a flurry of
blood that soaked my sleeve. The young man holding the pitchfork suddenly
tumbled backwards down the staircase as a nest of ravens covered him like
flies, pecking at his eyes and skin until they were bloodied and
shredded. His piercing screams of terror echoed around the hall, chilling
my very bones.
Juliet pulled on my
arm once more. This time, she succeeded in distracting me from the
mesmerising sight. We hurried past Edward and the other groom. They
were vainly attempting to swat away the birds, crying with agony as the flesh
was torn from their hands and faces.
The ravens had not
touched Juliet; even their attack upon me had been limited in its
ferociousness. We hurried on, passing the wailing housekeeper. A
shout from William at the top of the stairs made me glance back just before we
slipped through the door and out of the house.
Freed from my hold
by my distraction through the pandemonium on the stairs, William batted at the
birds with his horsewhip. He was full of rage and thunder and bellowed at
us, ‘Valancourt, I will hunt you both down and kill her if she doesn’t give me
my inheritance.’
I stared at his
struggling figure and fought hard to maintain my composure. Every fibre
inside me ached to race back up the stairs to make him swallow his words.
There was no way I would allow him to take Juliet from me, even if it meant
ending his life.
We ran out of the
portico onto the gravel. I was suddenly conscious that Juliet looked fit
to collapse. I glanced around expecting to be followed, but no one was
behind us. The carriage was nowhere to be seen, and I confess I began to
wonder if we were not stranded. But thankfully Juliet appeared to have
other ideas.
‘We can use
William’s horse. It will be saddled and ready. He always rides at
this time of day,’ she breathed. I nodded, and we ran to the
stables. Sure enough, a groom was just finishing saddling William’s
horse, anticipating his master’s arrival. I grabbed the reins from him,
and pushed him out of the way, quickly mounting the horse. Reaching down,
I lifted Juliet up into my arms, ignoring the protestations of the bewildered
groom who sought to retrieve the reins from me.
Juliet put her arms
around my waist and held on for dear life as I broke the horse out into a
gallop. We left the stable yard in a hurry, scattering the chickens and
ducks that dared to cross our path. The horse’s hooves clattered noisily
on the cobbled yard, announcing our hasty departure as I guided the horse out
onto the drive.
The Camerons were
now finally spilling out of the house. I knew it would be only moments
before William had another horse saddled and was close on our trail. I
glanced back and saw the ravens escaping from the portico door as though
mimicking a colony of bats. They rose into the sky, swirling away from
the house, and disappeared into the distance with a shriek.
I had little time
to contemplate the scene I had witnessed with the birds, or the words of
warning Juliet had uttered in my ear as they approached on the stairs.
Had she summoned them? Was she indeed, a witch? Was I? There
was no time. I decided that I would debate the answers to those questions
when we were safely back in London, out of William Cameron’s reach.
We reached the
woodland as the first few snowflakes permeated the grey cloud above us. I
slowed the horse to a trot, satisfied we were at a sufficiently safe distance
from the house and any pursuers. I looked down at Juliet. She had
not spoken since our flight. I felt her begin to shiver as the cold snow
settled on our skin and dampness began to seep through our clothes. I
tightened my arm around her waist and pulled her nearer to me, closing the gap
she had stiffly maintained between my body and her own.
She wore only her
dress and no coat. The attempt to keep her warm within the circle of my
arms was futile. But I would be dishonest if I did not admit that I also
wanted to feel her close, to be assured of her safety. Ever since our
shared vision the previous night, I could only think of her, the smell of her
skin, the softness of her pale cheek, and the fullness of her lips.
I expected an
objection when I pulled her to my chest, but there was none. Instead, she
wrapped her arms around herself in an effort to keep out the flurry of snow and
the harsh wind that was picking up and licking at our faces. She buried
her head against me.
She asked, ‘Does
William follow us?’
I glanced back once
more, to make sure. There was no one there, but I could hear angry shouts
far away. They were on our trail.
‘Yes, but he is far
behind. I hope to reach the village and raise alarm with the constabulary
before he catches up to us.’
I gently moved my
heel against the horse’s side, bidding him to go faster once more. ‘We
must talk about last night, Juliet,’ I told her. ‘How . . .’
She interrupted
quickly with a sharp, confused tone. ‘I don’t know how I saw it. I
may ask you the same thing. Maybe we are witches.’
‘Maybe we are.’
‘Do you really
believe that?’
I thought about it
for a moment. ‘I am not sure what we are, but we are certainly
special.’ I began to wonder, questions forming in my mind in quick
succession. What was I? What hadn’t my parents told me of my
heritage? What had Lord Leggatt known?
‘Did you summon
those birds?’ I asked her.
Juliet sat up away
from me, her body suddenly taut with indignation. I looked at her
curiously. ‘I did not. I would never do such a vile thing.
That was him.’
‘Him?’
She was
impatient. I knew fine well to whom she was referring, but I wanted to
know what she called the menace who stalked our dreams at night. ‘The
vampire. That’s what I call him. You can’t deny they exist, not
after seeing him.’ I slowly nodded. She continued, ‘I have seen him
before in my dreams, well not all of him. Somehow he always hides his
face from me. But last night was different. I felt as though I were
there. Last night felt like a vision, something I shared with both
yourself and him. Did he really do all of those horrible things to that
young woman?’
I bent my head for
a moment, feeling the responsibility for Sophie’s death once more cut deeply at
my insides. It took me longer than it should have to reply. ‘Yes,
he did. She wasn’t the first. There have been several other deaths
in London. I knew each victim, and I was forced to witness each of their
murders in similar nightmare visions.’
Juliet
shuddered, and hugged herself, rubbing her arms.
‘He seems to have
made it his unholy mission to force me to repent for my sins by murdering women
I have had a relationship with. He wants me to feel remorse and
responsibility for bedding fallen women. I am worried for all of the
others . . .’
I was going to
continue voicing my suspicions that the vampire also killed to punish Juliet
for rejecting him. But I did not want my charge to suffer any more pain.
She turned in the
saddle to look at me with disapproval. ‘All of the others . . .?
You look no more than twenty-two or twenty-three. For your young years it
seems you have known, for want of better words, a lot of women.’
I couldn’t help but
laugh at her sense of impropriety. Then seriousness overtook me once
more. ‘Maybe, but I am worried more so for you than any other. This
clergyman vampire claims to love you, and yet, you don’t know him?’
Her voice sounded
far away, ‘No, I don’t. I have dreamt of him on occasions, but I have
never made his acquaintance in my waking life. This is all so very
strange. Are you really to be my guardian?’
My voice was grave,
‘Yes I am. I am afraid Lord Leggatt is dying. He has passed the
honour to me.’
‘I am sorry – Lord
Leggatt seemed such a nice man.’
‘He is. Why
do you think the vampire sent those birds to help us escape?’ If I was
honest I already knew the answer, but I wanted to hear Juliet’s thoughts on the
subject.
‘Because he wants
me all to himself. I felt his anger towards me when he sent the
ravens. He wants me free so he can take me and make me suffer.’ She
shuddered again and pressed her face against my chest.
‘He will not have
you,’ I stated fiercely, and with more confidence than I felt. Bending
forwards, I kissed her lightly on the top of her head to reassure her of my
protection. ‘Why don’t we change the subject slightly,’ I ventured.
‘When did you notice you were different to others around you?’
‘Nine months
ago. I remember the very first day I found I could read people’s
minds. My uncle and I were taking tea outside. It was an
unseasonably warm day for April. It was one of the last times we were to
take tea by the lake at Eldridge. He became too ill after that.’
The smile on her lips faded, but her tone became excited.
‘William came out
of the house wanting to speak to his father about his will. He was so
angry. I began to hear a multitude of voices. One of them was
William’s, yet the words he spoke did not match the ones I heard. Vile
creature. My uncle’s valet was attending us, and though he did not speak,
I heard his voice. He was disgusted at William’s abruptness and lack of
respect towards my ill uncle. He would have felt more than disgust if he
had heard the way William wished for his father’s speedy death inside his
mind. That was when I learned my uncle was dying. I was
heartbroken. He loved me more than his own selfish children. I
shall never forget it.’ She stared out ahead seemingly lost, remembering
for a brief moment. I remained respectfully quiet. Then she turned
back to me, a smile fully reigning on her perfect lips.
‘It’s fascinating
to delve into the secrets of others. I should feel guilty, but I
don’t. I can’t help feeling intrigued. Some of the things I hear
are nothing short of wicked,’ she gave a small giggle. ‘But it’s also
very tiring after a while. Sometimes it is just too noisy to hear my own
thoughts. My head aches so much when that happens, I think I will go
quite mad. What about you?’
‘I haven’t really
tried to listen-in to anyone but you. It’s almost as though we share a
bond. When I saw you last night, my life suddenly made sense. It’s
as if we were always destined to meet, to be . . .’
I was interrupted
by the sighting of two men on horseback approaching us from the front.
Concerned that they were men from the Cameron household, I decided to change
our direction, but as I turned left two other men appeared. An advance
towards the right produced the same result. Three more closed in from
behind.
Juliet gave me a
frantic look. ‘These men don’t work for William,’ she said quickly.
‘What do they want with us?’
The riders closed
in, circling around us. My heart began to pound as my horse began to buck
in protest at the close proximity of the villains.
Love this! Please continue! Made my way over from thought catalog and I am hooked! I look forward to the next chapter!
ReplyDeleteBrilliant! Thank you. Next post will be Sunday. :)
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